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Proofreaders' Corner Vol. whatever

Postby Neige » 30 Nov 2020, 09:08

Question: Can you use the preposition "from" with "struggle"?

The following sentence sounds weird to my (non-native) ears.

Many low-income countries struggle from the inability to socially distance or work remotely.

What do you think?
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Postby Jumper K » 30 Nov 2020, 09:12

Neige wrote:Question: Can you use the preposition "from" with "struggle"?

The following sentence sounds weird to my (non-native) ears.

Many low-income countries struggle from the inability to socially distance or work remotely.

What do you think?

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Postby JC » 30 Nov 2020, 09:12

struggle WITH...
C wrote:
I remember some of them when they were nice boys - G for example.

But Coan has changed them

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Postby JC » 30 Nov 2020, 09:13

and you don't need 'inability', I'd say. Just 'struggle with working remotely' or something similar
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Postby Charlie O. » 30 Nov 2020, 09:46

I think it's slightly unclear either way. I would change "from" to "due to" or "because of".
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Postby Rorschach » 30 Nov 2020, 10:10

'from' is just wrong.

I think Charlie's 'due to' is best if you keep 'inability' in the sentence.
Solarskope's suggestion seems the more elegant to me.
I would consider: Many low-income countries struggle with social distancing and remote working.
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Postby ` » 30 Nov 2020, 10:15

Charlie O. wrote:I think it's slightly unclear either way. I would change "from" to "due to" or "because of".



But that totally changes the meaning of the sentence as it strongly suggests these countries' struggles with social distancing and working from home are a major cause of their larger issues which they plainly aren't.

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Postby Neige » 30 Nov 2020, 14:09

Sam Stone wrote:
Charlie O. wrote:I think it's slightly unclear either way. I would change "from" to "due to" or "because of".



But that totally changes the meaning of the sentence as it strongly suggests these countries' struggles with social distancing and working from home are a major cause of their larger issues which they plainly aren't.

Struggle with is simplest and best


I think you're right, there.

I'm going for "with", which was my hunch anyway!

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Postby Charlie O. » 30 Nov 2020, 17:19

I think Rorschach's suggestion is the best.
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Postby jimboo » 30 Nov 2020, 18:13

For a lot of folks covid is a bummer.
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