Proofreaders' Corner #248

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Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby Neige » 04 Sep 2018, 13:26

"My hairdresser notes that I have more hair on my ears than my head"

Shouldn't the preposition "on" be repeated? What do you reckon?
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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby DRUGS SNAKE » 04 Sep 2018, 13:43

Yes, because it would avoid potential confusion. There is a double-meaning present in the sentence you've quoted as it is.
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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby The Prof » 04 Sep 2018, 14:53

I hope you get a discount.

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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby Jimbo » 04 Sep 2018, 15:57

"Notes"? Elmore Leonard says we should use "say" when someone says something. "My hairdresser said ..."
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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby Charlie O. » 04 Sep 2018, 17:06

Another vote for "yes". Although as one's ears are usually on one's head, there's still room for confusion.
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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby caramba » 04 Sep 2018, 17:12

Jimbo wrote:"Notes"? Elmore Leonard says we should use "say" when someone says something. "My hairdresser said ..."


Noted.

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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby harvey k-tel » 04 Sep 2018, 18:15

Was your hairdresser taking a tour of your corn farm?
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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby Neige » 04 Sep 2018, 21:33

:lol:

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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby Jimbo » 05 Sep 2018, 06:54

What's a bald guy with hairy ears doing at a hairdresser anyway? My mother goes to a hairdresser. A guy goes to a hair stylist, maybe. A barber is more likely.
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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby Jimbo » 05 Sep 2018, 08:18

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Re: Proofreaders' Corner #248

Postby Darkness_Fish » 05 Sep 2018, 08:34

Jimbo wrote:What's a bald guy with hairy ears doing at a hairdresser anyway?

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